>>110139
It's a little bit of an improvement, but it's somewhat aimless. I'd recommed going through some basic courses, like Proko's(on youtube), Andrew Loomis's Fun with a Pencil(you can get the PDF online), this book i've previously linked here
>>54491 (i like it quite a bit) or any similar basic course.
There's also the 4chan /ic/ guide for beginners here, you can find useful stuff.( I'd recommend ignoring the obsession with memory drawing, it's severely overrated and boring. Do a bit every once in a while).
For you specifically i'd recommend also looking up a basic lineart tutorial and line control exercises. Your lines are very wobbly. And i'll mention buying a drawing tablet if you're serious with making art and you can afford it, if you haven't already. You can get cheap ones on ebay, doesn't need to be anything fancy nor have a screen.